In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can use structure in my writing.
When Indy got to the door to the tenth cave, it had a little hole in it. He peaked through the hole. In there was a giant Sasquatch witch ten Indiana Jones's could fit in he went in. To his surprise the Sasquatch noticed him and said "How can I help you, Human." "Well," said Indy "I need a favour," "What" said the Sasquatch, in great dilute. "Well, I Cinda need you to go to sleep till I get back to my home, and I convince my boss that your dead and also convince that I'm going to take you back to my place but you'll arduously go back to your house in your car." "OK" said the Sasquatch "I can do that." And so thay did, and you know what, it worked out perfectly.
Sunday, December 14, 2008
Friday, December 12, 2008
putting on the chrismas lights
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can do capital letters for names
once upon a time there lived a girl called Cassie and her mum her name was Sarah one night they puttied the lights on and there chrismas tree and decuraishenis then they made a card for santa then they went to bed then when they woke up they saw presents under there chrismas tree then they opend it and cassie got a laptop and the mum got a computer and then they got clothes and cassie got a dress and a tshirt and some jeans then when they went to bed santa came whirth the raindesa and stade the nigt then he made them some other presents for cassie and her mum then when cassie woke up she saw santa doing there presents then cassie huged santa and santa huged her then he said do you want to go out some where yes dose your mum want to come to i ll just tell her if she wants to come of cassie went to tell her to come then her mum came then they went to go to a cafe a then they went on the raindehers then they went chrismas in the park then they went to the muwsem and then to the motat then they went to a ice cream shop to get them a feed then they went for a other ride on the rainder then they went back home and had a shower and santa got to sleep there then santa made them some more presents then they went to bed but first they turned on there lights and chrismas lights and then went to bed the it was estar they couldent wat till it was estre the huged santa and said by
once upon a time there lived a girl called Cassie and her mum her name was Sarah one night they puttied the lights on and there chrismas tree and decuraishenis then they made a card for santa then they went to bed then when they woke up they saw presents under there chrismas tree then they opend it and cassie got a laptop and the mum got a computer and then they got clothes and cassie got a dress and a tshirt and some jeans then when they went to bed santa came whirth the raindesa and stade the nigt then he made them some other presents for cassie and her mum then when cassie woke up she saw santa doing there presents then cassie huged santa and santa huged her then he said do you want to go out some where yes dose your mum want to come to i ll just tell her if she wants to come of cassie went to tell her to come then her mum came then they went to go to a cafe a then they went on the raindehers then they went chrismas in the park then they went to the muwsem and then to the motat then they went to a ice cream shop to get them a feed then they went for a other ride on the rainder then they went back home and had a shower and santa got to sleep there then santa made them some more presents then they went to bed but first they turned on there lights and chrismas lights and then went to bed the it was estar they couldent wat till it was estre the huged santa and said by
Thursday, December 11, 2008
The 3rd continuing of Indiana Jones and the Giant Sasquatch
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can structure my writing.
"On to the fifth cave" said Indy. "I am so not scared" But just when he got round the corner it was a full snake pit "Okay, you are not scared, you are not sacred, you are scared." There was a sign on the ground that said 'If you are scared of snakes, try to find a a barrier cone and then throw the barrier cone into the snake pit and then find a torch and throw it on the barrier cone to make the barrier cone go on fire then before it burns out and then jump across.' "Okay Indy, just find a barrier cone first." He looked everywhere, but still no barrier cone. After about two hours Indy finally looked in the dumbest place he could think of, and guess what, it was there. Then Indy just grabbed the torch and put it on the barrier cone. He jumped over the snake pit and headed for the 6th cave. To his surprise, from the 6th cave was a mine cart and was two tunnels. One said 'Long way' and one said 'shortcut'...
"On to the fifth cave" said Indy. "I am so not scared" But just when he got round the corner it was a full snake pit "Okay, you are not scared, you are not sacred, you are scared." There was a sign on the ground that said 'If you are scared of snakes, try to find a a barrier cone and then throw the barrier cone into the snake pit and then find a torch and throw it on the barrier cone to make the barrier cone go on fire then before it burns out and then jump across.' "Okay Indy, just find a barrier cone first." He looked everywhere, but still no barrier cone. After about two hours Indy finally looked in the dumbest place he could think of, and guess what, it was there. Then Indy just grabbed the torch and put it on the barrier cone. He jumped over the snake pit and headed for the 6th cave. To his surprise, from the 6th cave was a mine cart and was two tunnels. One said 'Long way' and one said 'shortcut'...
Wednesday, December 10, 2008
the sheep
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can use capital letters for names.Once there was ten sheep and a dog
santa has a holaday
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can yos full stops
Santa was bored he wanted to have a holaday in new zealand.So he paged his bags got his rain deyers redy and they were of.When he got there he was tiyered so he put his tent up and he whent to bed. when he woke up desided to have a walk on the beach.
Santa was bored he wanted to have a holaday in new zealand.So he paged his bags got his rain deyers redy and they were of.When he got there he was tiyered so he put his tent up and he whent to bed. when he woke up desided to have a walk on the beach.
the man that to waited to fiy
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can use captl letes fur names.
ouse a paun time a man called dk waitedto fiy he was so bolled he did ti like doing enthusing aso but flying . so he tiad Superman he taide to take hei Powers .but he can dot take his powers .he had a ider to get his powers off him . he beot a seshle gun to get his powers . then when he did it fale I can fly
ouse a paun time a man called dk waitedto fiy he was so bolled he did ti like doing enthusing aso but flying . so he tiad Superman he taide to take hei Powers .but he can dot take his powers .he had a ider to get his powers off him . he beot a seshle gun to get his powers . then when he did it fale I can fly
sant is caming to tone with liam and tom and nina
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can full stops at the end of sentences.
oneday sant liam and tom and nina thay went to liam home to give him same pess for liam he got a sed bot for writ and land then we went to tom home same we can give him same prees for tom he got a set of lego star ware play sasn game but on the game he got sot in the tame he did bad lake the end
oneday sant liam and tom and nina thay went to liam home to give him same pess for liam he got a sed bot for writ and land then we went to tom home same we can give him same prees for tom he got a set of lego star ware play sasn game but on the game he got sot in the tame he did bad lake the end
The Sea Anemones
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can use capital letters for names.
one day in the deep sea there was a sea Anemones he was called Anemones
one day in the deep sea there was a sea Anemones he was called Anemones
Tuesday, December 9, 2008
Ratatolle
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can prof read my writing
One sunny Sunday night out in the cold there was a rat how needed a place to stay warm so he wondid down to a nice and warm shop were they were cooking and serving plates fool of food. Some of the plates of food were spgiti bolanas and the the other thing that he saw was his favorite cheese in salad and that was how it started.He ran to the cheese salad he tripped the person up and the cheese salad went all over the floor.There was only one person in the shop how ate cheese salad off the floor.
One sunny Sunday night out in the cold there was a rat how needed a place to stay warm so he wondid down to a nice and warm shop were they were cooking and serving plates fool of food. Some of the plates of food were spgiti bolanas and the the other thing that he saw was his favorite cheese in salad and that was how it started.He ran to the cheese salad he tripped the person up and the cheese salad went all over the floor.There was only one person in the shop how ate cheese salad off the floor.
santas holiday aukland
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can full stops at the end of sentenses.
once santa wanted to go on a holiday.then he had an idea im going to go to aukland.so he paked his bag and went to aukland. im going to go to the beach first said santa.so he went to the beach
then a kid came ha look its santa have you got any pressents?no im just on holiday.then he went to have a ride on a boat.then he went back home.
once santa wanted to go on a holiday.then he had an idea im going to go to aukland.so he paked his bag and went to aukland. im going to go to the beach first said santa.so he went to the beach
then a kid came ha look its santa have you got any pressents?no im just on holiday.then he went to have a ride on a boat.then he went back home.
Monday, December 1, 2008
the alien
Once there was an alien. It was very silly because it tugged on the curtains like it was a cat. All the aliens were good around him. They were very cool because they wanted to jump off the skytower.
(Scribed by Miss Thomas, unknown error caused story to be lost!)
(Scribed by Miss Thomas, unknown error caused story to be lost!)
THE NOTY CAT AND THE FAT CAT THAT WAS MIN
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can capitl litter for names
once there was a noty cat that dident lisin her name was Abey she was very min she ate evry one and they sriped ontill a other cat came but wen the other one came he was fat then the People woke up and tessed the fat cat and said ha ha the fat cats name was called Danny Danny was poor he had no family
once there was a noty cat that dident lisin her name was Abey she was very min she ate evry one and they sriped ontill a other cat came but wen the other one came he was fat then the People woke up and tessed the fat cat and said ha ha the fat cats name was called Danny Danny was poor he had no family
The 800th trip to saturn
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can write at least 5 sentenes
The first probe to saturn exploded.''OK'',said the spacecaptin, ''who wants to go to saturn''.
''Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh'', screamed the crew''.''All of you get in!!'',yelled the space captin.
''But there are alians in space'',sobbed the crew.''Allright,your biting your fingers off so
your fired''.''wwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''screamed the crew.''OK,i'm going'',said
the captin.10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1, blast off!!!.years later.''Saturn!! yelled the spacecaptin.''To bad i
bought a plastic crew.''years later,''i'm back at earth,to bad you didn't come'' said the captin.''waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''wailed the crew.The end
The first probe to saturn exploded.''OK'',said the spacecaptin, ''who wants to go to saturn''.
''Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh'', screamed the crew''.''All of you get in!!'',yelled the space captin.
''But there are alians in space'',sobbed the crew.''Allright,your biting your fingers off so
your fired''.''wwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''screamed the crew.''OK,i'm going'',said
the captin.10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1, blast off!!!.years later.''Saturn!! yelled the spacecaptin.''To bad i
bought a plastic crew.''years later,''i'm back at earth,to bad you didn't come'' said the captin.''waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''wailed the crew.The end
The doom that was bad
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can use fullstops at the rnd of sentces
Once upon a time there was a doom. he was the baddest doom in the world.when any one called him hole he kills them. When any one went inside him he said DOOM!. and they where poor Because he killed them and they where Dead.one day a man wanted to see with his whiff that the doom was reall there names where called Babby and Many.they went marching to the hole .once They got there they called him some thing noty hole then the doom said want was that they rillisizd that it was relly.they said please don't kill us well do want every you want us to Do he said sillins OK they said.he wanted to kill them and he did because they called him hole. and now on when any one call me doom or hole they will get killed because now on my name is Dummy. The End
Once upon a time there was a doom. he was the baddest doom in the world.when any one called him hole he kills them. When any one went inside him he said DOOM!. and they where poor Because he killed them and they where Dead.one day a man wanted to see with his whiff that the doom was reall there names where called Babby and Many.they went marching to the hole .once They got there they called him some thing noty hole then the doom said want was that they rillisizd that it was relly.they said please don't kill us well do want every you want us to Do he said sillins OK they said.he wanted to kill them and he did because they called him hole. and now on when any one call me doom or hole they will get killed because now on my name is Dummy. The End
Tuesday, November 25, 2008
Bad Louis
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can put full stops at the end of sentances .
On Saturday my dad took louis down to the beach but he was a bad doggy.HE RAN AWAY FROM DAD!!!Louis had to go up the road with NO LEAD!!!My dad had to stop all the cars till he got home. when they did get home he got a big telling off!!
On Saturday my dad took louis down to the beach but he was a bad doggy.HE RAN AWAY FROM DAD!!!Louis had to go up the road with NO LEAD!!!My dad had to stop all the cars till he got home. when they did get home he got a big telling off!!
the Wild heard of hores
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can describe the events in the story.
Long ago there was a legend about the wild horse.I didn't believe it but one day I heard about the legend and why it was a legend.I went on the Internet on a web site called www. legends .co.mi (mi by the way means mannastory
island,) this is what the computer said the person how is reading this will have the wild horse in there life, they will Joyn them on a mission to find the lost fields .Now Rosella saw the wild horse she was ready to go.
Long ago there was a legend about the wild horse.I didn't believe it but one day I heard about the legend and why it was a legend.I went on the Internet on a web site called www. legends .co.mi (mi by the way means mannastory
island,) this is what the computer said the person how is reading this will have the wild horse in there life, they will Joyn them on a mission to find the lost fields .Now Rosella saw the wild horse she was ready to go.
Zac Is Coming...............................
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can Use Capital Letters For Names.
BROOM ! Zac went in his Mother's car.He went to the Air-Port to go to Bla Bla. When He got in the Air Port He heard BANG! BANG! BOOM! by the planes coming in.He checked out but he realized that he was going in his own plane."Yippee!" he shouted" thank you!".When Zac got in the plane he had a screen in front of him "YAY".He got out his spy pad and texted his Captain and the text said "I'm in plane all by my self to your country".15 Minutes later Zac got a replie and it said"Wow I hope I see you there".Zac Replied "me too I hope I see you there aswell".he got out his Ipod."La La La!" Zac shouted "La La La" he said again he repeated heaps and heaps of times.When he got to the country the country's name was bla bla but when Zac got out of the plane he shouted "I'M WELCOMED TO BLA BLA!"he went on a air-port Kiosk.He saw something go past Zoom! It was a human.He went after him."COME BACK HERE!!!!!!!".said Zac to the man named............................................ "Cameron"He was a Dr Drastics helpers.Zac chased around the whole Air-Port zac shouted "COME BACK HERE STUPI#".He did it again and again and again.Soon the guards came to take Zac away from chasing Cameron .Zac poked his tongue out at Cameron and Cameron poked his tongue back at Zac.His Mum just arived at Bla Bla the country of Fun! But it wasn't fun at all until he got out of the Air-port............................................"WOW" said Zac. He got in the taxi with his mum.He went to his hotel called "HOLIDAY is IN" Zac said again "WOW".He checked in to the hotel Nair to the Mountain.He went to his room number "1050" and went to bed. THE END
BROOM ! Zac went in his Mother's car.He went to the Air-Port to go to Bla Bla. When He got in the Air Port He heard BANG! BANG! BOOM! by the planes coming in.He checked out but he realized that he was going in his own plane."Yippee!" he shouted" thank you!".When Zac got in the plane he had a screen in front of him "YAY".He got out his spy pad and texted his Captain and the text said "I'm in plane all by my self to your country".15 Minutes later Zac got a replie and it said"Wow I hope I see you there".Zac Replied "me too I hope I see you there aswell".he got out his Ipod."La La La!" Zac shouted "La La La" he said again he repeated heaps and heaps of times.When he got to the country the country's name was bla bla but when Zac got out of the plane he shouted "I'M WELCOMED TO BLA BLA!"he went on a air-port Kiosk.He saw something go past Zoom! It was a human.He went after him."COME BACK HERE!!!!!!!".said Zac to the man named............................................ "Cameron"He was a Dr Drastics helpers.Zac chased around the whole Air-Port zac shouted "COME BACK HERE STUPI#".He did it again and again and again.Soon the guards came to take Zac away from chasing Cameron .Zac poked his tongue out at Cameron and Cameron poked his tongue back at Zac.His Mum just arived at Bla Bla the country of Fun! But it wasn't fun at all until he got out of the Air-port............................................"WOW" said Zac. He got in the taxi with his mum.He went to his hotel called "HOLIDAY is IN" Zac said again "WOW".He checked in to the hotel Nair to the Mountain.He went to his room number "1050" and went to bed. THE END
the Weekend
In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can organise my writing.
On the weekend I played cricket we lost about 79 -60.My Brother also lost about 69-145.
I watched the All Blacks against Wales.The All Blacks won 29-9.If the All Blacks bet England they win every match in the end of year tour.The All Blacks Are expected to thrash England.
The kiwis won the rugby league world cup final against the Kangaroos 34-20.Lokyer from the kangaroos got man of the match and billy Slater from the Kangaroos got best player of the whole world cup.
The All Blacks beat England easily.The All Blacks got the cup.
In soccer The LA Galaxy beat the Oceania All stars 3-0.David Beckham nearly scored a goal but the goal keeper saved it set up 2 goals.Cristiano Ronalda got European soccer player of the year.He plays for Manchester United.The Welington Phionex lost to Adielade United 5-1.
On the weekend I played cricket we lost about 79 -60.My Brother also lost about 69-145.
I watched the All Blacks against Wales.The All Blacks won 29-9.If the All Blacks bet England they win every match in the end of year tour.The All Blacks Are expected to thrash England.
The kiwis won the rugby league world cup final against the Kangaroos 34-20.Lokyer from the kangaroos got man of the match and billy Slater from the Kangaroos got best player of the whole world cup.
The All Blacks beat England easily.The All Blacks got the cup.
In soccer The LA Galaxy beat the Oceania All stars 3-0.David Beckham nearly scored a goal but the goal keeper saved it set up 2 goals.Cristiano Ronalda got European soccer player of the year.He plays for Manchester United.The Welington Phionex lost to Adielade United 5-1.
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