In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can write at least 5 sentenes
The first probe to saturn exploded.''OK'',said the spacecaptin, ''who wants to go to saturn''.
''Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh'', screamed the crew''.''All of you get in!!'',yelled the space captin.
''But there are alians in space'',sobbed the crew.''Allright,your biting your fingers off so
your fired''.''wwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''screamed the crew.''OK,i'm going'',said
the captin.10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1, blast off!!!.years later.''Saturn!! yelled the spacecaptin.''To bad i
bought a plastic crew.''years later,''i'm back at earth,to bad you didn't come'' said the captin.''waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa''wailed the crew.The end
Monday, December 1, 2008
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2 comments:
Jamie it is great to see when you get started straight away you can write a whol story - you certainly met your goal of writing 5 sentences. Keep up the hard work.
cool story jamie from your buddy
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