Monday, December 1, 2008

The doom that was bad

In this piece of writing my goal is to show that I can use fullstops at the rnd of sentces

Once upon a time there was a doom. he was the baddest doom in the world.when any one called him hole he kills them. When any one went inside him he said DOOM!. and they where poor Because he killed them and they where Dead.one day a man wanted to see with his whiff that the doom was reall there names where called Babby and Many.they went marching to the hole .once They got there they called him some thing noty hole then the doom said want was that they rillisizd that it was relly.they said please don't kill us well do want every you want us to Do he said sillins OK they said.he wanted to kill them and he did because they called him hole. and now on when any one call me doom or hole they will get killed because now on my name is Dummy. The End

4 comments:

Marnie said...

Courtney, it is great to see you putting fullstops at the end of sentences. Keep up this work and also you could put some capital letters after the fullstop to start the next sentence.

hope said...

you meet your goal courtny and agreat story

hope said...

you meet your goal courtny and agreat story

hope said...

you meet your goal courtny and agreat story