Monday 21 May 2012

Pelting Rain


I look out the window and the rain was pelting down against the ground. Splash, splash! Puddles outside, hail on my roof. It woke my Dad and some lighting lit the room. When I woke up it was wet with puddles all around the house. I saw Jack Frost on my bedroom window.

By Jack

1 comment:

  1. I really like all of your descriptive words and onomatopeia.

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